Rage: A Multitage Trailer

So, I've decided to make an actual page for my upcoming montage "Rage." I've fully written...erm...thought out the trailer. Here's how it's going to go.


 * Black Screen*


 * Low drone sound fades in*


 * Smoke settles into the scene*


 * Rage...* (fades in, slides floats slightly across the screen, then fades back out)


 * Drone sound still playing*


 * Primal and at the same time beautiful...* (""""""")


 * Drone sound intensifying, more ambient, atmospheric music sets in, setting a sinister mood.*


 * It brings out who we really are, our inner demons...our inner beast...* (""""""")


 * Close up of CQB Spartan looking at ground fades in, still slowly zooming in*


 * Faded battle crys, gun shots, and explosions can be heard*


 * And now, I have one request...* (""""""")


 * Spartan slowly looks up, tons of battles replay in his visor in fast forward*


 * As he continues looking up slowly, the camera starts shaking more and more*


 * SHOW*


 * Back to Spartan looking up*


 * ME*


 * Back to Spartan looking up*


 * YOUR*


 * Back to Spartan looking up*


 * Screen starts cracking as shaking intensifies and music turns over to a deathcore song with someone screaming.*

(I'm still thinking of what happens hear, but either the screen explodes or gets set on fire or something to symbolize rage)


 * Cue some clips of gameplay to music*


 * Gameplay fades out*


 * Early 2010* (fades in slowly, then fades out)